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Because We Are Too Many?

Has this happened to you?  Having submitted a well-crafted piece, you wait in limbo for the several months The Writer’s Guide  told you it would take.  You check your mailbox/email as the assessment period crawls to a conclusion.  And finally, eventually, you give up waiting.  You are left wondering what it means…is the piece rejected, or lost in space?  Writer Beware recently linked to a blog related to the hot issue of “no response means no” here.

Those readers who submit will know what I’m talking about.   It takes a lot of guts to keep throwing your work into the publishing abyss.  And if you’re being very good and not multi-submitting your work the turn-around time can easily extend into years.  At this moment I have a number of stories I could send out.  Some of them have been awarded in competitions.  Some have already received polite rejections, or no replies.  All of them took months to get an answer (or not).  It’s a painful process, no doubt about it, and possibly worse than ever these days.  More people are writing, doing NaNoWriMo, and, if agents complaints can be believed,  swamping magazines, agents and publishers  with barely edited drafts.  Shocking!

When I go into bookstores I feel slightly sick sometimes.  I’m thinking Ecclesiastes 12:12 here.  Definitely way too many books.  Way too many people thinking “publish or die.”  Much of it won’t be reprinted.  The turn around in book stores now is in the months, not years, for new releases.  And for every book on the shelf, how many that never made it?  Apparently over 100,000 manuscripts circling the globe at any given time.  Most of those manuscripts will run out of fuel and crash land somewhere (hopefully not over a populated area.)  And some of them will actually be good ones.

We were warned.  Everyone said it would be hard to get in print.  After several years of writing I was dismayed to discover the damning statistics, how few writers get published, and even if they do, how little they get paid.  After a term of denial I have (sort of) accepted that.  I’m not exactly sure where I am in the Five Stages of Grief, possibly a little angry when I hear agents dismissive comments, or how editors usually get paid many times more than their authors. It doesn’t make sense, that is, until you look back through the history of writing.

Across many cultures it used to be the mark of an educated individual to be able to express oneself in writing, whether letters, journals, or poetry.  Doesn’t it just give you a warm feeling to take your place in the pantheon?  And believe me, I do think it’s wonderful for more and more people to write, to join groups, to do courses, even to do NaNoWriMo.  But I’m also thinking of the Chinese Art I studied in university, and the ideal of the scholar, the lone seeker sitting in a hut beside a river, contemplating nature, perhaps penning (er, brush-stroking) a poem.  It makes me wonder, could we find some purpose to writing other than being published?

Being in print seems to have become an issue of personal validation.  It’s a kind of fame that is available to people in all shapes, sizes and colours, seemingly.  All you need is pen and paper, right?  Unfortunately, if being published confers value, being rejected must confer the opposite: unworthiness.  I wonder just how damaging it might be to some to spend years hurling the dredgings of the psyche at a brick wall?  I’m so grateful to Natalie Goldberg for teaching me that there is another way of looking at writing:  it always has value if it is written truthfully and from the heart.  And perhaps the self-knowledge benefit we gain from it is actually its highest value.

I’d like to bring this all together with a couple of ideas I’m grandly calling The Burinsmith Manifesto.  This is the guide I work to.  If we all did this whole problem of not getting a reply and even not being published would become irrelevant.

BE REALISTIC ABOUT YOUR WORK.  Explore what the writing means to you.  Have you created something you really want to share with the world?  Have you spent time developing your skills, style and ideas?  Stripped of the romantic notion of writer as celebrity, and aware of the financial limitations of what is available, is this still something you want to pursue?  If not, maybe explore other ways of sharing your ideas:  journalling, writing letters, blogging.  Write poems for those you care about.  Tolkien wrote The Hobbit as a story for his children.  Join a writing centre.  Get together with other writers and make an anthology.  Self-publish.  You may even find that when freed from the pressure of getting published your writing starts to take on greater personal significance.  It might even become worth publishing.

ONLY SUBMIT YOUR BEST WORK.  So you have decided in spite of all you want to have a go at being published.  Now is the time to apply another layer of honesty to your work.  Sort the sheep from the goats, not everything you write will be great.  Clearly, the publishing industry is no crap-shoot so be hard on yourself.  Sub-standard, derivative, unoriginal, unedited or poorly presented work does not have a chance.  Ask, does the manuscript hold up to or even surpass the quality of published work you have read?  If you think it does, go ahead and submit.   Then even if the piece is rejected, even if it’s not responded to, at least you will know it wasn’t because you hadn’t done your part.

I hope that doesn’t sound harsh.  I certainly don’t mean to be.  Recently I met an idealistic new writer with his first manuscript in hand, just about to post it off to New York “to be made into a book and, hopefully later, a movie.”  I smiled, remembering a time when I shared that optimism.  Now, nine years in, I think I’m ready to relax a little.  I’m not exactly sure how it’s going to look in terms of my output, or even subject matter.  Deep, slow breaths.  It’s part of a healthy life to reorient one’s compass from time to time.

There’s Gold In Them Thar’ Hills.

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Isn’t the English language a strange and wonderful thing?  Take, for example, the word “show.”  As a verb it could mean a variety of things from showing an animal in a contest to an artist displaying work.  As a noun it could be anything from a broadway production to the bloody discharge indicating labour has begun.   Of course in writing, “show don’t tell” is a bit of a mantra, meaning, let the scene play visually, rather than explaining what is happening with commentary.  Show don’t tell is something a lot of writers struggle with.  Some find it hard to capture the details, while others get bogged down in every little impression until the reader is drowning in the stream of consciousness. In an article in The New Writer a few years ago there was a great comment about showing, the writer (damn, wish I could find the details) compared reading show don’t tell stuff with “being up against the coal face.”  In other words, writers are between a rock and a hard place when it comes to the fine balance between showing and telling.

For me this interesting little slang definition of “show” I found on dictionary.com sums it up:

27. Austral ), ( NZ mining  a slight indication of the presence of gold

This really hits it for me.  Because in showing it’s not just about an explosion of impressions on the page.  It has to be going somewhere.  And it has to be a glorious nugget, giving the reader the opportunity to infer from the carefully revealed gleaming scene that there is so much more to these characters in their situation.  And I think it works because if readers get to participate in the story-making it’s much more interesting for them.  They’re not passive receptors, but participants.

In the project I’m working on at the moment I’m looking for new approaches to keep on track (see here for why), and one thing I’m trying is giving each passage a title, something that distils the purpose of that particular section.  It helps me to keep in mind that each part has to make a contribution toward advancing the story.  So last night’s work would be “The Boy loves his mother’s bread.”  And I can see right now that, while I love that piece, it doesn’t give anything new to advance the story.  So it probably won’t make the cut (though I’ll probably mine it for details later.)  It’s not easy, is it, tunneling away on a story? But somehow even that one glittering piece of prose every now and then seems to be reward enough to keep going.

Headin’ On Over to Book Country

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In an earlier post I was joking about writing genre fiction, a bit of a bête noire among many literary writers.  This year I’ve churned out a few of what I gather are genre pieces.  One was sci-fi, the other couple, fantasy.  Come to think of it, a lot of my work is gothic-tinged, sci-fi reminiscent or fantasy-tending.  No bodice-rippers yet, but I can’t make any promises at this stage.

I suppose the way I work with genre is to write what I’m writing and figure out later what it wants to be.  I’ve always read across genres so I suppose it makes sense I would be influenced.  Don’t you love it that Margaret Atwood can drift between historical fiction, literary and fantasy without anyone raising an eyebrow? On the flip side it’s intriguing that some people write one genre only.  It’s a whole other world out there, with new genres sprouting like mushrooms.  Have you heard of “Hobby Mystery”?  Is that like Nancy Drew?  Or, “Paranormal Romance,” which makes me think Twilight.  There is a cool genre map on this site, Book Country.

Book Country is nearly finished its beta stage and ready to formally launch.  The site aims to be a writing community for genre writers, where authors can post their work and read/review/receive critique from other hopefuls, and (maybe even) professionals.  Members can enter competitions and read useful articles from established genre fiction writers.  I’m always on about forming a community of writers.  This might be a helpful way of hooking into a ready-made one.  I wonder how the site will function, and whether it will actually provide a leg-up into the publishing world?  Whether you’re an Urban Fantasy Writer or into Steam Punk, or not even sure if you are writing in a particular genre, have a look and see what you think.